Mariia Gonchariuk
ENG 1100_35
Thesis
Knowing how many lives we lost during the revolution and the war and seeing all the beneficial results from the revolution, freedom of speech and end of the corruption, I can surely say that the revolution was worth it.
Thank you for posting your thesis Mariia.
ReplyDeleteI have a question though, in what way can you shorten your emerging thesis for clarity? What words can be removed? What are your most important words?
What singular and plural personal pronouns can be removed from your thesis? Remember that your thesis is supposed to be subjective. How can you fix this? Moreover, remember that the goal of a research and argumentative writing is to *appear* neutral, even though you are giving your opinion. Therefore, what words can be removed from your thesis?
Thank you for posting your thesis Mariia.
ReplyDeleteI have a question though, in what way can you shorten your emerging thesis for clarity? What words can be removed? What are your most important words?
What singular and plural personal pronouns can be removed from your thesis? Remember that your thesis is supposed to be subjective. How can you fix this? Moreover, remember that the goal of a research and argumentative writing is to *appear* neutral, even though you are giving your opinion. Therefore, what words can be removed from your thesis?